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2012-8-25 09:00 原創(chuàng) · 圖片2

這是讀了挺有名的一本繪本書“MY DAD”后,小宇的改寫。就是把書里的萬能爸爸完全改反過來,小宇是越寫越高興,邊寫邊笑呀。 
希望小宇的這篇習(xí)作能僥幸逃過偶爾來這視察的老爸雙眼。 
My Dad 
He’s all worst, my dad. 
My dad is afraid of everything even a butterfly. 
My dad can’t jump over the moon or walk on a tightrope.  
He can’t wrestle with giants or win the easiest race on sports. 
He is all worst, my dad. 
My dad can’t eat like a horse and swim like a fish. 

written @ 05-12



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13年前
小宇的想象力真豐富。不知道他給這個故事按的結(jié)局是什么呀?
13年前
xjmomo 小宇的想象力真豐富。不知道他給這個故事按的結(jié)局是什么呀?
就這些了,他是趁興頭寫的,寫了幾分鐘就跑開玩去了。
13年前
這可不能給老爸看到
13年前
小宇是越寫越高興,邊寫邊笑呀。

--- 小宇的作文課真開心??!怎么讓孩子開心快樂的學(xué)習(xí),我要好好跟你學(xué)學(xué)咯!
13年前
愛萌寶貝 小宇是越寫越高興,邊寫邊笑呀。 --- 小宇的作文課真開心??!怎么讓孩子開心快...
這是首可愛的童詩~
13年前
謝謝smilecandy提醒,那我就把原版貼這里,轉(zhuǎn)給童詩晨誦專欄去分享咯,想篡改經(jīng)典的麻麻們可以借鑒一下,很有fun呢!

《My Dad》
by Anthony Browne.

He's all right, my dad.
My dad isn't afraid of ANYTHING, even the Big Bad Wolf.
He can jump right over the moon, and work on the tightrope without falling off.
He can wrestle with giants, or win the father's race on sports day, easily.
He's all right, my dad.

My dad can eat like a horse, and he can swim like a fish.
He's as strong as a gorilla and happy as a hippopotamus.
My dad's as big as a house, and as soft as my teddy.
He's as wise as an owl, and daft as a brush.
He's all right, my dad.

He's a great dancer, a brilliant singer, he's fantastic at football and he makes me laugh. A lot.
But that's not all that's great about my dad.

I love my dad, And you know what?
HE LOVES ME!
(And he always will.)

繪本鏈接:http://bbs.wangjing.cn/thread-490743-1-1.html
這里有十幾本繪本吧,my dad 在頁面中間位置


13年前
既然有daddy,怎能沒有mommy?

《My Mum》

A warm, funny tribute to Mum (and to mums everywhere) by the brilliant author/illustrator Anthony Browne

She's nice, my mum.
My mum's a fantastic cook, and a brilliant juggler.
She's a great painter, and the STRONGEST woman in the world!
She's really nice, my mum.

My mum's a magic gardener.
She can make ANYTHING grow.
And she's a good fairy.
When I'm sad she can make me happy.
She can sing like an angel, and roar like a lion.
She's really, REALLY nice, my mum.

My mum's as beautiful as a butterfly, and as comfy as an armchair.
She's as soft as a kitten, and as tough as a rhino.
She's really, REALLY, REALLY nice, my mum.

My mum could be a dancer, or an astronaut.
She could be a film star, or the big boss. But she's MY mum.
She's a SUPERMUM!
And she makes me laugh. A lot.

I love my mum, And you know what?
SHE LOVES ME!
(And she always will.)


繪本鏈接:http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_496394960100a4zg.html


13年前
愛萌寶貝 謝謝smilecandy提醒,那我就把原版貼這里,轉(zhuǎn)給童詩晨誦專欄去分享咯,想篡改經(jīng)典...
你這么上心,都整理出來了,謝謝~
13年前
愛萌寶貝 既然有daddy,怎能沒有mommy? 《My Mum》 A warm, funny tribute to Mum (and ...
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