這次寫的是葉修的視頻,女高中生事件。發(fā)現(xiàn)娃喜歡關注時事新聞,也喜歡去寫這些。散文、虛構故事、小說,完全和娃無關。昨晚花了近1小時寫的,非寫不可,那就寫吧!手寫第一頁,很多沒用動詞過去時,和我說,寫的太急,沒空思考…
比起《Only He》,后面寫的幾篇改動都比較多,分數(shù)也沒《Only He》分數(shù)高,但擋不住《Only He》帶來的創(chuàng)作熱情??!也算是給新二的背誦學習帶來了積極的推動作用,要學從句、學連詞、學動詞時態(tài)運用,這些確實很不足。
雖然寫的耗時,還要老母親費力發(fā)批改網(wǎng)修改,但好歹也算是個積極的興趣,我也樂意看她美滋滋的分享給我,給娃加油!??
Power of your heart
She was a high school student. She read lots of books and she did lots of homework papers and she always studied until midnight. In short, she looked hard working. But she found those were not very effective for her study. Her target was going to a good university, but her marks were fairly far from her target. One day, she consulted a teacher. She told him she always studies hard and she wanted to get good results and her teachers always tell truth like "study is important!" "study can change your life!". Nevertheless her efforts weren't paying back. Why? The teacher considered she was so hard -working. Maybe she just lacks the methods of learning. So he gave her some methods like muse training and playing exercise.
Months later, she replied to the teacher. This time, she told him that the methods he gave her were still not effective. Why? Those methods did not work! The teacher thought. Days later, the teacher thought her efforts were untrue. "If no parent's demand, if no truth your teachers tell, how could you be?" "I thought, I don't have motivation." So she wasn't really hard -working. Her hark -working was at parent's demand and teachers tell. So she must pretend to work hard. How could she have motivation to study? The answer is to look up the world widely. But she was a high school student. Everything was too late. So her problem couldn't be solved now.
To get a good result, hard -working isn't the only thing we need. The most important thing is: you have dreams which you want to be true. From this you will be better.