原版故事簡介里的學(xué)習(xí)點

這段時間一直在登記原版書，整理的信息包括難度、詞匯量和故事簡介，發(fā)現(xiàn)故事簡介雖然文字不多，但學(xué)習(xí)之處不少。

1. 長句比較多，邏輯合理，層次清晰?？梢越璐朔治龇志浜瓦B詞的運用方法。
2. 長句較多，因此標點的使用更復(fù)雜和豐富。
3. 簡介大多在100多詞，所以詞匯和表達力求精煉準確。
4. 100多字的內(nèi)容，需要傳達故事背景、主要人物和事件，核心思想?？梢詫W(xué)習(xí)下如何組織文字進行表述。
5. 故事簡介中有啟發(fā)式提問，懸念設(shè)置等等處理

之前，孩子每讀完一本書，我就鼓勵她寫點文字記錄，幾篇之后感覺有些雷同。恰好發(fā)覺到故事簡介的這些可取之處，就安排起背誦和默寫，還真有效果，長句組織有進步。此外，通過默寫慢慢掌握標點的使用，這也是平時欠缺的。

附一篇原版書的簡介

Sunny is just that - sunny. Always ready with a goofy smile and something nice to say, Sunny is the chillest dude on the Defenders team. But Sunny's life hasn't always been sunbeamy-bright. You see, Sunny is a murderer. Or at least he thinks of himself that way. His mother died giving birth to him, and based on how Sunny's dad treats him - ignoring him, making Sunny call him Darryl, never "Dad" - it's no wonder Sunny thinks he's to blame. It seems the only thing Sunny can do right in his dad's eyes is win first place ribbons running the mile, just like his mom did. But Sunny doesn't like running, never has. So he stops. Right in the middle of a race. 
 

With his relationship with his dad now worse than ever, the last thing Sunny wants to do is leave the other newbies - his only friends - behind. But you can't be on a track team and not run. So Coach asks Sunny what he wants to do. Sunny's answer? Dance. Yes, dance. But you also can't be on a track team and dance. Then, in a stroke of genius only Jason Reynolds can conceive, Sunny discovers a track event that encompasses the hard hits of hip-hop, the precision of ballet, and the showmanship of dance as a whole: the discus throw. As Sunny practices the discus, learning when to let go at just the right time, he'll let go of everything that's been eating him up inside, perhaps just in time.

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