The girl who survived

給娃弄這個(gè)到批改網(wǎng)上改，改動(dòng)很多，有些可能原意都變了，明早還得請示一下大boss！

盡管肚子里是一堆蹩腳英文，但架不住人家創(chuàng)作熱情高漲，苦逼了我這老母親，改了這么久，居然又這么晚睡！

批改網(wǎng)評價(jià)中肯，改完得分73，好歹不全是車轱轆話！

她說這是第二篇關(guān)于動(dòng)車事故的，以后寫點(diǎn)好的題材！期待啊～??

The girl who survived 
Once she was a normal little girl. But one day, an accident changed her life. 
The day of the summer was in 2o11. She and her parents sat in a high -speed train when they went back home. Just then, it was raining. Out of the window it was a beautiful sight. But they didn't know an accident was coming. Lightning struck the fuse wire many times and caused it confused. That fuse wire was connected to the railway. That was it, the signal lights on the railway would all turn green. It means it could safely pass if there is another train. So the train driver of the train didn't know there was another train on the same way. At last, the dispatcher told him " there is a train on this way and you must pay attention to your operation." But it was too late. It couldn't stop although the driver had opened emergency brakes. The train stuck to the train in front of it. The girl and her parents were thrown at once. Next day, there was no one alive. Some people saw a little waving hand." There is a survivor!" Then, she became the last person who survived. She was called "A marvel". 
Fortunately, she was sent to her uncle's home and lived there. 
Now ten years have passed, she has grown up. She lives with her uncle's family happily as she had lived before. 
Many people's hearts were broken. So they wanted the accident wouldn't happen again. Now high -speed trains have many safety measures. By high -speed train for travel is much safer. Maybe the tragic event was 
a reminder to the high -speed train.